One by one they run, different colors and size, all in poor shape and weak.
Crossing the finish line they tumble to the floor, hitting the wrong mark over and over again.
I feel empty, exhausted; perhaps my thoughts need more training.
Empty: when you know what you want to say but your words fail you, hitting the listeners ears with a loud clang bringing no illumination but only confusion.
Written for Sonya’s TLT – WEEK Twenty-one
Nicely done
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Thanks Andrew.😊😊☺
Glad you like it.
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That’s a very nice take! 🙂
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Thank you very much!!
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Well said! Lovely
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Thank you very much!!
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I think you have your thoughts trained quite nicely.
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Awww, thank you!
Wait till I get rattled …
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Training your thoughts — Brilliant!
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Thank you!
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You are very welcome 🙂
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I couldn’t refrain from commenting. Very well written!
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Thank you very much!!
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