Photo prompt courtsey of Dale Rogerson
I could hear them coming.
I knew what awaited me, my fate had been cast in stone many moons ago.
They would question me, prod at me endlessly.
Even though we had gone through this ritual multiple times. I never knew what to expect.
They attempted to creep up on me, as though this gave them the advantage.
They needn’t bother with the subtility, for they failed woefully at it. They could not sneak up on stale cheese even if they tried.
I waited in trepidation; my reprieve was over.
“Hi dad,” They both shrieked.
Work was over, life continued.
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Cute twist
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Thanks Neil.
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Nice twist
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Thanks Iain.
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I had to smile reading this as children just love thinking they have the advantage. Nice build up in the story.
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Thanks James.
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Hahaha! I love it. Wonderful twist there.
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Thanks Dale!
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🙂
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Great take on the prompt 🙂
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Thank you soo much.
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As thoughts lead on to reality, it is still a wonderful life. Well done.
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Thanks Bill.
It is indeed.
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🙂
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So cute
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Thank you!
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Haha! Nice twist.
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Thank you much!
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Hilarious! You had me fully expecting a horrible space-invader sci fi piece, and then that last sentence :). Laughing out loud 🙂
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LOL!
Happy to have made you laugh!
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Dear Chioma,
I’ll chime in with others on the delightful twist at the end. I daresay, Dad looks forward to this ritual. Fun.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle.
He does indeed. Although tired atimes.
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