Five years old:
“Jay can Gideon have a turn with your airplane?”
“No”
“It’s kind to share and …”
“Nooooooooooooo”
Gideon looked on with soulful eyes. Not a tint of green was seen.
Ten years old:
“Hey, pass me the ball.”
Steven passed to Matthew. Matthew passed it to Andrew.
Gideon ran around ignored, his eyes enlarged. Pupils tinted green like the field.
Fifteen years old:
Thomas sat tied to the goal post in his underwear.
His cigarettes and trousers swung from another’s shoulder.
They had ignored him but not anymore.
Green was a nice colour.
Thank you Rochelle for hosting the writing event Friday fictiooneers. The rule is to write a 100 word piece in response to the provided picture. Please click the link to visit Rochelle’s blog. It will be worth your while. And click this link to read other stories and write ups.
Dear Chioma,
In light of current news stories and those ignored and bullied, I hope that’s as far as green-eyed Gideon goes with revenge. Heartfelt and evocative story in so few words.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle!
I hope so too.
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Good use of the colour, although I fear Gideon is on the wrong path.
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I know but unfortunately we live in a world that does not give the introvert a lot of space to evolve.
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Jail by 20?
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Oh dear! I hope not.
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One can only hope that he’s reached a turning point in his life.
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Well i make no promises, Keith.
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Hopefully, those soulful 5-year old eyes will see a different way for him to move forward in adult life.
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I hope so too, but it might be a while.
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It may happen exactly this way. Well done.
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Thanks Bill.
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Gideon’s revenge was sweet. Hoping his “friends” won’t push him to go farther.
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I hope so too.
With friends like them,who needs enemies.
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These things do build up over time if left unchecked!
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Very true.
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