Sweat dripped down furrowed brow, one could mistaken him for a sacrificial lamb at the altar. He felt every one of his bones age with each passing minute. To say he envisaged a different beginning to his divine call would be putting his present predicament lightly.
Renting the night air, the scream temporarily halted his thoughts.
Surely the almighty could have found another route for childbirth.
Still attached to its mother the babe was silenced with a single swing of the sword.
He fainted, his master scoffed, a second scream pierced the night.
Twins had no place in this court.
Written for Friday fictioneers a writing challenge hosted by Rochelle. The picture was provided by the lovely Janet Webb, the task is to write a 100 words story inspired by it. Thanks Rochelle for hosting the challenge. Thank you for stopping by… do click on the link to read other stories.
Brutal. Certainly not the best start to such a career.
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Amazing!
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Thank you!
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Visceral and mysterious. I had to read this several times before I realised this wasn’t a world in which the males bear the children
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Very happy to evoke such a comment Neil.
Thank you!
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Dear Chioma,
Horribly well done. I mean that as a compliment. It took my breath away.
Shalom,
Rochelle
PS Welcome back, I’ve missed you.
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I missed you too!
Buried under work, school and life generally.
It feels good to reconnect again.
Thank you for such a lovely compliment.
❤
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A good story.
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Thanks!
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Wow! The end took me by surprise. I read it three times to let the story sink in. Well done!
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Happy to have surprised you!
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Wonderful, breathless sense of mystery in this one. What a snappy end.
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Wow, that was gruesome
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Sorry, I couldn’t shake the story line away from sacrifices or death.
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Lovely take on the prompt
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Thank you!
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OMG I wasn’t expecting that. I’m almost speechless.
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I will take that as a good sign.
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Thanks Sandra. 🙂
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This is the brutality of probably a Medieval court. Those were not “the good old days”. Good writing, Chioma. —- Suzanne
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Thanks Suzanne!
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