“Morning darling,”
“Morning gorgeous, off to work already?”
“You bet I am, no rest for the wicked and what not.”
Her phone rumbled with his laughter.
“Did you get any snow over there?”
“Nope! Not a speck of snow or frost in sight. Mr sunshine is basking in warmth.”
“You lucky devil.”
“Well I brought hell with me baby and your missing it.”
She smiled.
“Can you open the door for me?”
“The door …”
“Surprise!”
His smile looped into a convex shape.
“You’re in room 546 right? Come on my feet hurt.”
Hell was getting an icy makeover.
Sorry I have been missing for a while now, my mind was overtaken by life.
Written for Friday fictioneers a writing challenge hosted by Rochelle. The picture was provided by the lovely Roger Bultot the task is to write a 100 words story inspired by it. Thanks Rochelle for hosting the challenge. Thank you for stopping by… do click on the link to read other stories.
Nice surprise ending, sweet.
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Thanks Iain!
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What a nice surprise 🙂
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Very sweet
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Thank you!
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Dear Chioma,
Happy to see you back. Loved the happy ending. Surprises like that are so much fun.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle!
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A fun one. Good take on the prompt… get the door!
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He’s going now … 🙂
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I was a tad confused on who’s who, but after a second reading… (you might want to change the first “your” to “you’re” 😉 )
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Thanks Dale will do that.
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Aww! Love the surprise ending. Sweet and perfect 🙂
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Thanks Jade.
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A good start to someone’s day. Nicely done.
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Thanks Sandra!
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A sweet take on the prompt. Welcome back.
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Thanks Alicia!
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Between your story and your explanation you have me smiling 🙂 🙂
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Awwww
Thanks Dawn, glad I made you smile.
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Lovely nice surprise at the end. 🙂
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I hope it’s a pleasant surprise, that she’s not entertaining a “friend”.
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You spotted the hints….
I didn’t have a happy end in mind and it’s him who is entertaining someone else.
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Welcome back. I’m not sure it was a pleasant surprise for him. I’m wondering now what he’s been up to in that hotel. I’m understanding he’s the one in the hotel. Good writing, Chioma. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Exactly he’s been up to some hanky panky.
Thanks Suzanne.
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