Energy waves bounced unto the walls, I felt like a rocket launched into space. Walking to my new office, I made a conscious effort not to peep into every office, resisted the urge to smile at everyone as I walked past. Could they tell it was my first day?
A deflated balloon floated close to the ceiling slowly descending, it’s attempts to absorb energy from the walls around it failing terribly.
I walked down the corridor avoiding open doors and eye contact, lips taut with weariness. Could they tell it was my two-thousand-five-hundred-and twenty-eighth day in this place?
Written for Friday fictioneers a writing challenge hosted by Rochelle. The picture was provided by Amy Reese the task is to write a 100 words story inspired by it. Thanks Rochelle for hosting the challenge. Thank you for stopping by… do click on the link to read other stories.
Oh how time flies! The eager excited newbie has grown into the weary old timer. Nicely done
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Thanks Ameena!
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Nice. Fits with the picture
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Nice work
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That early enthusiasm soon fades! When we moved into our new premises it was so exciting…
Nice piece 🙂
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Thanks Draliman!
Indeed it does.
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Great contrast and nice use of repetition – lack of eye contact for two different reasons, unsmiling lips. Well done.
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Thanks Alicia.
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Ha! I have certainly felt like this. Great juxtaposition. I’m wondering if this means the last day is coming up? Well told
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I think so!
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Thanks Laurie
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Interesting movement in such a short space of time. From newbie to someone who really doesn’t want anyone to bother him or be here.
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Thanks Mandi
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Ha! I wonder how many have felt like this at their place of work!
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I wonder too.
Thanks Clare.
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Love the comparison of the feelings of the new employee and the one tired by his experience there.
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The image of a punctured balloon feels so very apt
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Thanks Bjorn!
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I also loved the deflated balloon, it also mirrors the walls bouncing with energy in the first paragraph. Great story about how even the best job eventually turns into drudgery.
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Thanks Gabriele!
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Great depiction of the wearying effect of dull routine. Some great imagery in here
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Thanks Michael!
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Shew, that’s a lot of days!
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Hehehehe!
Many have probably worked more than that.
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I sense the imminent appearance of a fairy godmother. But then, I’,m usually wrong
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Dear Chioma,
Well done capture of the contrast between the first day’s excitement of a new job and the dismal reality of an old, tedious one. Good job.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle!
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Great contrast between the beginning and ending. It sounds as though the job became routine finally. Good writing. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thanks Suzanne!
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