One plus one, two.
Two plus two, four.
Three plus three, six.
… a star slowly emerges.
Equal numbers giving rise to something bright.
One plus two, three.
Two plus three, five.
Three plus four, seven.
… cuts of diamonds slowly emerge.
Unequal numbers giving rise to something brilliant.
“Whatever sequence, code or pattern you’re trying to study, write or discover you must remember: the best secrets are kept in plain sight, the simpler they’re the more difficult it is for the human mind to accept. There are stars in our numbers, there are impurities in our diamond.”
Oh well …. what can I say. That’s what came to mind.
Written for Friday fictioneers a writing challenge hosted by Rochelle. The picture was provided by Roger Bultot the task is to write a 100 words story inspired by it. Thanks Rochelle for hosting the challenge. Thank you for stopping by… do click on the link to read other stories.
Dear Chioma,
Intriguing piece. Sort of a melding of Math and poetry. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle!
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Sounds like finding a riddle when there’s none… or maybe OCD of finding causality when there is none.
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LOL
I like the latter option.
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Could definitely stare at this picture long enough trying to find the patterns in it. Nice idea.
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Thanks Iain!
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Beautifully written, very poetic.
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Awww thank you!
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You are correct. On so many occasions the simplest solution is right before our eyes.
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Thanks Andrew.
Indeed it’s very true.
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Actually, Chioma, you wrote a sweetly brilliant piece. One of our great American authors, Carl Sandberg, once wrote that “the sea and the stars are held by numbers.” The poem is called Monkey of Stars. One of the lines is — “Oh hoh, yah yah, loo loo, the meaning was five, six, seven.”
You have made my day! Five out of five galaxies!
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Thanks Kent!
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I searched up his work, brilliant stuff.
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Sorry, I misspelled his name. It’s Sandburg. Check out his Monkey Of Stars poem.
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It worked for me. With most prompts I write what comes to my mind first.
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Thanks Michael!
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I don’t typically like math, but this way I can handle it…or better, comprehend it ! 🙂 Nice take on the prompt!
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Thanks Morgan.
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Beautiful piece! Liked it a lot.
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Thanks Mandi!
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Brilliant idea, and beautifully written. There is a pattern in everything and the flaws open new paths.
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Thanks Gabriele.
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Just what the doctor orrdeed, thankity you!
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There are patterns everywhere, you just have to look! Nicely done. 🙂
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Thanks Clare!
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Spontaneity is great and it works with this piece. So often the first idea that arrives is the best. Nice piece.
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Thanks Michael!
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Wonderful imagination! I love it that which ever way it goes, the end is brilliant!
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Thank you very much!
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Or I should say, brilliance!
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I’m glad this is what came to mind. It’s intriguing. “(the simpler they’re” – this threw me off. Perhaps spelling it out – “the simpler they are” wouldn’t make the reader stumble.)
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Thanks Alicia.
Ahh will make the change now.
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I enjoyed reading this. Was it a free write?
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Thanks Dawn.
Yes it was.
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Great post with lots of impntraot stuff.
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Thanks.
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