First time.

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The wonder in her eyes sparkled like the fire works above “I can’t believe you planned all this, it’s so beautiful.” Shifting her gaze from the skies to him, she smiled.

Shrugging his shoulder “I wanted tonight to be special.”

“It’s more than special, it’s perfect.”

Sensing her gaze he turned, and in that moment they pulsed in rhythm to the primal tunes of ardor.

Her mind swirled in circles to a whole new world.

His raced in a quest for revenge.

Soon his seed would flood her virgin womb ripping it apart in minutes.

Unsoiled descendants to avenge Komossa’s honor.

PHOTO PROMPT -© Vijayay Sundaram
Copyright Vijaya Sundaram

I have no clue why my mind went down this path …. it just did.

Written for Friday fictioneers a writing challenge hosted by Rochelle. The picture was provided by Vijaya Sundaram, the task is to write a 100 words story inspired by it. Thanks Rochelle for hosting the challenge. Thank you for stopping by… do click on the link to read other stories.

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Welcome to my blog, Its lovely to have you here! I am Chioma and I like to think of myself as an avid reader and a non biased writer.I got married and joined my partner to start our own little new home miles away from family (*tears*). what are my ideologies: I am a strong advocate for maintaining balance and modesty in every area of life. I believe everyone is entitled to their opinions but they should never be forced on another. I strongly agree that you are allowed to shout your views at the top of your lungs, just as I am allowed to totally ignore them. However it is my belief that in order to create a home far from the familiar environment one must make certain compromises. Not compromises that change who you are or your principles but those that allow you live at peace with the neighbours. That said, I hope my page brings a whole new perspective to living under a whole new climate. Thank you.

40 thoughts on “First time.”

  13. Great story. I feel sad she’s losing her virginity to a guy who only wants revenge for some guy. Hopefully, something happens to stop this or she doesn’t find out he’s not a nice guy.

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  17. This is horrifying. I definitely didn’t see the ending coming when you started. I feel like I need to see the narrator get his just desserts. This poor woman. I may need to imagine her foiling his plan before he has the chance to enact it. Yikes, as Neil said, is right.

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  18. What an unexpected and intense story. That ending was scary. Poor girl! She had no idea what was in store for her!

    (Sorry about my late response to your story! My computer is kaput, and I’m using my husband’s.)

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