The wonder in her eyes sparkled like the fire works above “I can’t believe you planned all this, it’s so beautiful.” Shifting her gaze from the skies to him, she smiled.
Shrugging his shoulder “I wanted tonight to be special.”
“It’s more than special, it’s perfect.”
Sensing her gaze he turned, and in that moment they pulsed in rhythm to the primal tunes of ardor.
Her mind swirled in circles to a whole new world.
His raced in a quest for revenge.
Soon his seed would flood her virgin womb ripping it apart in minutes.
Unsoiled descendants to avenge Komossa’s honor.
I have no clue why my mind went down this path …. it just did.
Written for Friday fictioneers a writing challenge hosted by Rochelle. The picture was provided by Vijaya Sundaram, the task is to write a 100 words story inspired by it. Thanks Rochelle for hosting the challenge. Thank you for stopping by… do click on the link to read other stories.
Yikes!!!
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Thanks Neil!
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It’s a Yikes here as well 🙂
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Thank you.
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Very dark, not sure about the line [his stumped in a march for revenge] mike
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Ahh thanks Michael.
I was trying to depict how fired up and anti romantic his own feelings were.
Don’t know if that makes sense.
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I understand it’s so hard to fit all one wants to in 100 words, but that’s the fun of the challenge.
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Indeed it is revised it now.
Let me know your thoughts please.
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Terrifying!
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Thanks Iain!
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Fantastically Intense for so few words 🙂
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Thanks Morgan!
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Dear Chioma,
Oh my! Oh, my, my, my! Intense and well told.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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That fairy blogmother is a huge compliment.
Thank you very much.
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Wow, I wasn’t expecting that! Great stuff 🙂
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Glad to know it wasn’t so predictable.
Thanks Draliman.
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Ugh, that is scary! Well done. 🙂
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Thanks Gabriele!
Just read your about page nice.
An internet stalker oh dear.
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Good grief. I need to lie down now. But not anywhere near him.
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Hehehe
It’s ok he won’t bite.
Thanks Sandra.
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The outcome is pretty grim for this romantic evening.
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Yes it is.
Thanks Liz!
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Wow, he really knows how to cut to a girl’s heart and gain access to the lower region as well. I’m thinking he won’t be a great role model of a father.
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it can’t get any darker
http://obliqview.blogspot.in/2016/09/victory-march-they-had-won-greatvictory.html
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Thanks IB.
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Great story. I feel sad she’s losing her virginity to a guy who only wants revenge for some guy. Hopefully, something happens to stop this or she doesn’t find out he’s not a nice guy.
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I feel sad for too Mandi.
I doubt anything will stop it now.
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Thanks Mandi.
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Ouch.. I hate it with wolf in sheep’s clothing… sinister and dark
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Thanks Bjorn!
And I totally agree with you.
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Wow, that was creepy!
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Thanks Dawn.
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An unexpectedly unromantic story! 😀
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That was the plan.
Thanks Dahlia.
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This is horrifying. I definitely didn’t see the ending coming when you started. I feel like I need to see the narrator get his just desserts. This poor woman. I may need to imagine her foiling his plan before he has the chance to enact it. Yikes, as Neil said, is right.
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Hehehehe
Thanks Emily.
Sadly I don’t see his plans being foiled, she’s besotted.
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What an unexpected and intense story. That ending was scary. Poor girl! She had no idea what was in store for her!
(Sorry about my late response to your story! My computer is kaput, and I’m using my husband’s.)
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As I understand it this is a male alien. Really brutal revenge. Good writing, Chioma. —- Suzanne
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Nailed it Patricia!
I am doing cartwheels here.
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Me and this article, sitting in a tree, L-RAE—N-I-N-G!
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LOL
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