Everyone, I mean everyone loves open night Fridays at Funky munky pub.
It’s something to look forward to, loud music, pure unadulterated ale, lovely ladies with no strings attached. Different shapes and sizes to please everyone’s appetite.
There was no need for prolonged chats or engaging conversations to source out a prime partner, everything is said with a sly look here and a hand rub there. Effective communication and satisfaction guaranteed.
I asked for Nicola next Open Friday night, no one answered.
But I couldn’t shake Nicola’s sultry eyes, so I pressed further. Frankie said she was in the chimney. That wasn’t any better, so I asked about the other girls he said they were in the recycle, they hadn’t tried to make personal contact with the client. He said to relax the green blinds were up on the left window so we would get fresh stock tonight.
Open Friday nights were spectacular, the preserve of Funky munky patrons. No one gets to know.
In response to the writing challenge flash fiction for aspiring writers hosted by Priceless Joy click on the link to visit the blog. The photograph is from the lovely TJ Paris (interesting photo can’t wait to see all the stories it inspires) and the challenge is to write a 100 – 150 words (+/- 25 words) story inspired by it. Do click on the link for other stories.
Great writing, terrifying story.
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Thank you!
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I feel like an idiot but I don’t understand this. Is it a brothel?
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So sorry for the confusion Joy, I tried to jam too much into the story. It’s supposed to be a regular pub which every last Friday turns to some sort of brothel for the patrons.
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Thank you for explaining it to me. I’m sorry I didn’t understand.
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Not at all Joy!
I felt it was too many words for a short story without proper structure.
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Very creepy story, I liked how you were subtle about the happenings at the pub, the hints of what was going on gave the story an eerie feel.
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A green curtain…may become the New color. It seems to work for Friday nights anyway. Word of mouth will spread quickly and they may have to add additiona nights! Funny. 🙂
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Thanks Jessie!
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very creepy though i was trying to fugue out what illicit happenings were taking place….a good story…keeping me the reader thinking way after the last line ends…Gina.
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Thanks Gina!
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That sounds like some horrible patrons. Intriguing read.
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Indeed they are.
Thanks Jacqueline.
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