Ocean breeze

‘If I said your feelings for me were like the tossing waves of the ocean, never stable always changing, what would you say?

‘I would say that only a boat atop the wave knows which way it tosses and turns.’

She sighed.

He smiled.

‘And if I said you delve into the very depths of my heart like a demented pirate on uncharted waters ..?’

‘I would say fear not mi’lady for I will chart every inch of your depth with care till I find the delta of your love.’

She smiled.

He grinned.

Gentle caresses buoy on summer’s warm breeze.

PHOTO PROMPT- Copyright - Jan Wayne Fields
Copyright Jan Wayne Fields

For some reason the final line doesn’t sit right with me, but I don’t want to lose the word buoy and I want to keep it in present tense. What say ye?

Thanks everyone for the suggestions.

Written for Friday fictioneers a writing challenge hosted by Rochelle. The picture was provided by Jan Wayne Fields, the task is to write a 100 words story inspired by it. Thanks Rochelle for hosting the challenge. Thank you for stopping by… do click on the link to read other stories.

51 thoughts on “Ocean breeze

  1. Lots of erotic connotation there, I thought – exploring depths, anyone? 🙂 Love the line about the demented pirate – they have a very interesting and lively relationship I think 🙂

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