Ocean breeze

‘If I said your feelings for me were like the tossing waves of the ocean, never stable always changing, what would you say?

‘I would say that only a boat atop the wave knows which way it tosses and turns.’

She sighed.

He smiled.

‘And if I said you delve into the very depths of my heart like a demented pirate on uncharted waters ..?’

‘I would say fear not mi’lady for I will chart every inch of your depth with care till I find the delta of your love.’

She smiled.

He grinned.

Gentle caresses buoy on summer’s warm breeze.

PHOTO PROMPT- Copyright - Jan Wayne Fields
Copyright Jan Wayne Fields

For some reason the final line doesn’t sit right with me, but I don’t want to lose the word buoy and I want to keep it in present tense. What say ye?

Thanks everyone for the suggestions.

Written for Friday fictioneers a writing challenge hosted by Rochelle. The picture was provided by Jan Wayne Fields, the task is to write a 100 words story inspired by it. Thanks Rochelle for hosting the challenge. Thank you for stopping by… do click on the link to read other stories.


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