Lying in the field Egbert, Humphrey and Onslowe basked in the rare sunny smiles of an autumn afternoon.
“That scarecrow reminds me of someone, only I can’t remember who?” said Egbert.
“Whoever it is, they need a face lift.” Onslowe scoffed.
Humphrey chuckled, while doing his best to rid his nails of dirt.
“Am very serious, I can see him but in my eyes, someone very familiar.”
“You sure it’s not Mr Eamon you’re remembering?”
Satisfied with his cleaning, Humphrey set about trimming his nail with his teeth, “Who’s Mr Eamon?
“The old fella that lives on the next farm, thin as a rail, when he laughs you can’t tell if his choking or having a heart attack.”
“I remember now, it’s the salesman from last week, I ran into him at the pub, says he’s going to make a fortune selling sunscreen.”
“Sunscreen! around these parts, the scarecrows got better job prospects than he does. He’ll make a fortune alright, a fortune of holey shoes.” Onslowe barked.
Their bellies rumbled with laughter as it started raining.
In response to the writing challenge flash fiction for aspiring writers hosted by Priceless Joy click on the link to visit the blog. The photograph is from Louise at the storyteller’s abode (interesting photo can’t wait to see all the stories it inspires) and the challenge is to write a 100 – 150 words (+/- 25 words) story inspired by it. Do click on the link for other stories.
Hahaha! It must rain a lot there, therefore, no need for sunscreen! LOL! This was my favorite phrase, “when he laughs you can’t tell if his choking or having a heart attack.” Hahaha! CUTE!!
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Yes it does rain a lot!
Thanks Joy!
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Yeah, Priceless Joy picked out one of my favorite lines! I really like the back-and-forth conversation. The overall flow. I almost felt at home with them
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Thanks Izzy!
I can’t seem to find your story on your blog but I got an email notification.
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Yeah, I deleted it. A lot was going on that week. :-S
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Awww!
I hope its all settled down now.
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It has. Thank you so much!
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That salesman needs to move somewhere a lot hotter if he wants to make a fortune selling sunscreen! Good story, Chioma, with some great dialogue and descriptions. Nicely done. 🙂
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Thanks Louise!
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Great humor…Enjoyed this. 😊
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Thanks Jessica.
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I love the names you’ve given your characters! All I ever manage is “Dave” and “Pete” 🙂
Sounds like they live around here. It’s raining at the moment and I just made a hot water bottle to keep my feet warm 😦
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Thank you very much! Comes from watching too many episodes of Keeping up appearances and green green grass.
It’s also raining here, enjoy the weather.
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A fun story, Chioma, and very appropriate, considering our awful weather right now! Selling sunscreen in this country would definitely be a job with no prospects. Nice dialogue, too. 🙂
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Love your witty take on it . Great job!
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Thanks Daisy!
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That salesman has his job cut out for him.
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He sure does!
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Thanks Jacqueline.
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