Cease wandering

“Margaret what happened? Talk to me.” He asked gently.

“Do  you want some tea?” She replied.

“No thank you.”

“There’s nothing to say William, I did what any mother would do to keep her son safe.”

Opening the can of mushroom soup she carried on.

“I told him she was no good, a trashy girl with no dreams, but at seventeen he thought he was invincible, the world  was a cesspool in desperate need of his seed. An immature seed.”

“What has Leroy got to do with this.”

“Everything. George joined the army, throwing away his life so he could provide for him and his scavenging mother.” 

“Does she thank him? No, no she doesn’t, runs off at the first sign of discomfort. I didn’t mind, good riddance I say. I was happy caring for him, my baby needed me again and just when everything was going well, all this talk of prosthetic began. I could see his eyes widen with excitement, he was going to go wandering off again. I couldn’t let that happen.”

Copyright Phylor

In response to the writing challenge flash fiction for aspiring writers hosted by Priceless Joy click on the link to visit the blog. The photograph is from Phylor (interesting photo can’t wait to see all the stories it inspires) and the challenge is to write a 100 – 150 words (+/- 25 words) story inspired by it. Do click on the link for other stories.


14 thoughts on “Cease wandering

    1. George is her son and Leroy is her grandson. Her son joined the army so he could provide for his son after he became a teenage father.
      Sorry for the confusion.
      Don’t know if this helps.


  1. She is very disturbed! She is ruining his life and he needs to speak up for himself and get the prosthetic or she will keep him until her death! Love can be a stranglehold sometimes….and this is an example of it. Very good story, Joy!

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