“I am not exactly looking for a commitment at the moment.”
“Congratulations, Jules said you got the job. When do you start?”
The skyline danced to the mesmerizing tune of rippling waves.
Its solid structures less intimidating with each motion, more accommodating, more endearing, best to remember it was a reflection.
“I heard Sam just finished his masters, that boy is ambitious.”
“You still live in that apartment?”
The bridge neither cared for the commuters speed nor the rumbling of the sea.
It stood firm, solid in the knowledge of its role. .
“You split from your girlfriend again?”
“Don’t you think it’s time you settled down.?”
The barricade kept him safe.
Letting him soak up the view, delighting in its calming effect, safe from any disaster.
They thought he was ready, they thought he wasn’t ambitious.
He knew he was, he knew he wasn’t.
He smiled, no matter how much a sailor loves the ocean if he can’t swim, he had better not jump in.
In response to the writing challenge flash fiction for aspiring writers hosted by Priceless Joy click on the link to visit the blog. The photograph is from Barbara Taylor (interesting photo can’t wait to see all the stories it inspires) and the challenge is to write a 100 – 150 words (+/- 25 words) story inspired by it. Do click on the link for other stories.
Very good! It confused me a bit, but I enjoyed reading them!
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Oh dear, might I ask which bits were confusing?
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Oh, it just didn’t seem like a story, that’s all.
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Ohhh I see.
It’s the reflection of the narrators thoughts as he sits looking out.
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Oh! Now, I understand! Thank you for explaining that to me.
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I loved the concluding sentence, how true is that…..well done..
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Thanks Michael.
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“Temet nosce”… it’s a new learned phrase for me, thanks for sharing. 🙂 It’s a good reminder for us to know ourselves. 🙂
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You’re welcome.
Most times people feel like they know us better than we know ourselves. Sometimes it’s true but it’s important we see that self they see before following the direction they point in.
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So true. This reminds me of a quote I read from a book,
“Sometimes people think they know you. They know a few facts about you, and they piece you together in a way that makes sense to them. And if you don’t know yourself very well, you might even believe that they are right. But the truth is, that isn’t you. That isn’t you at all.”
~I do hope we don’t get lost amidst those versions of ourselves people are trying to make. ^^
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I love the quote. It sums up my story very well.
Not going to forget it anytime soon.
Can I ask what’s the name of the book?
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It’s a great quote to live by. 🙂
Sure. It’s from the YA book, This Song Will Save Your Life.
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Thanks Maria.
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I loved the snippets of memory interspersed with the description. Very sad.
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Thanks FPB
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A very good story and I really love the concluding line!
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Thanks Angie!!
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I really like the way this is written. Exceptional story!
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Thank you!
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I interpreted the last line as saying if you don’t feel something is right for you, don’t do it. I think you are talking about taking a job or not. 🙂
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I am happy the message came across. I was referring to life decisions as a whole, make the choices that fit perfectly for you as an individual.
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Hmmm… The mental battle that external validation brings. Sometimes, it’s best to do things at one’s own pace.
The people who are quick to judge when one fails to swim are the same ones who will judge even more harshly when one starts to sink. 😀
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Very true my dear, whichever way you go someone is bound to get the wrong idea, feel or reaction. Thus you are better off making the choice best for you and those you believe should matter at that time and place.
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How have you been? Looooong time, no read/see.
Lol.
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I’m fine, thank you for asking. Took a tiny break from the blog, and now I’m back. 🙂
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A really cleverly constructed tale. The closing sentence sums it up perfectly. Wise words indeed.
The Mayor. A very short story.
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You’ve magenad a first class post
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Thanks!
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