J is for Jet black
Rolling her eyes for the ninth time “What do they think they are doing, getting all dressed, it’s just gross, how can they do this to me? It’s like they don’t care how this makes me look, I’m the teenager, I should be the one going on romantic dates not them. It’s just disgusting!” she sighed loudly.
“I don’t think it’s disgusting, I think it’s very romantic” Ashley remarked leaning on the headboard.
“That’s just it they shouldn’t be doing romantic or jazzy at their age, especially as I don’t …”
And off she went again on her ‘I’ rant.
What I wouldn’t give to have her jazzy ‘loopy’parents as she liked to refer to them in exchange for my professional-well mannered parents. Her parents brightened every room, mine painted every corner jet black with their silence and ‘educated criticism’, leaving not a smidgen of color in site. I was tired of her silly rant.
Picking up my backpack “Your parents obviously love each other, do you know anyone else at school who can say the same?
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Is it even possible for parents to do anything that doesn’t either upset or embarrass a teenager? 🙂
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Well … XD
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That sounds like teenagers, comparing each other’s parents. I feel sorry for Ashley, having parents that are so boring they paint the corners in a room “black.” The first teenager is lucky that she has parents that are in love with each other. Great story! I enjoyed reading it.
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Thanks Joy!
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Great story! A lot of emotion and teenage angst captured in those few words! Well done! KL ❤
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Thank you very much!
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Great story! 🙂
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Thank you!
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Excellent story! They say the grass is always greener on the other side and that seems to apply to parents as well.
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XD indeed.
Thanks J.A
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Very bittersweet. Well written.
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Thanks Jenn!
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Teens complain about a lot of things…some unjustified and they don’t even realize it, but someone else can see it very clearly..like her friend. Great story.
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Thanks Jessie!
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Aww.. such a sweet take on the prompt! You’ve painted the two contrasting family well with your words. 🙂
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Thanks Maria!
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My pleasure! 🙂 🙂
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Great story. There is often a difference in perception of what is seen through the lens of each viewers background!
@Samantha/samratkel from
Shadow Realities
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Very true!
Thanks Sam!
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Lol. I love it from the teenager POV. I think all teenagers are embarrassed by their parents, it’s just how it is. But Ashley is very correct, many parents, divorce and split up, so she should be thankful she has parents who make time to date. Awesome job on this prompt!
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Thanks Mandi.
Indeed most teenagers would wish their parents away to the moon if they could.XD
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Great take on the prompt! Love this line: painted every corner jet black. Really profound, conjures powerful images of the parents.
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Thanks Kay!
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My pleasure 😊
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Fantastic imagery — painted the corner “jet black” versus the mutual love “jazzy…brightened every room”… I can see it, feel it, and totally understand it. One of my favorites this week – thank you for sharing 🙂
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Oh thank you very much!
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You are very welcome! These seemingly small details paint a vivid picture, literally in color and texture, but in very few words. It’s not black, it’s *jet* black….and *painted* their lives. I feel the heaviness, the darkness, the weight the protagonist feels. I may be printing this one out for my writers to review in a few weeks when we discuss how details add layers to writing. Thank you again 🙂
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Oh thank you very much.
Would love to know how it goes, if you don’t mind.
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I will try to link back, but illustrating scenes with details like color and texture can really bring a piece to life — I think they’d gain a lot 😉
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Thank you!
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Of course 🙂
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I would rather have the silly romantic parents to the polite, cold room painters.
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