12:00 pm
“Hey handsome, care to meet up
somewhere more exciting today?”
“Doesn’t matter where we meet
babe anywhere will be exciting.”
“Awww datz so sweet ♥♥♥”
” 🙂 what’s the plan?”
“Marriott hotel near the docks,
u kno the one?”
“Sure. Close to
city center isn’t it? How about somewhere more private?”
“I’m getting really fed-up with this need for
privacy. Is there
“forget I said anything.
four pm good for you?”
“something I need to know?”
“Calm down don’t go all vixen.”
“Fine.”
“No secrets here babe.”
…………………….
He took the bait. It will cost you an extra £10,000 pounds for a video.
Written for Friday fictioneers a writing challenge hosted by Rochelle. The picture was provided by Marie Gail Stratford and the task is to write a 100 words story inspired by it. Thanks Rochelle for hosting the challenge. Thank you for stopping by… do click on the link to read other stories.
Perfect WA Chat capture 🙂
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XD
Thank you!
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Seems a lot of folks are being pushed off buildings this week. The use of a text interaction for this narrative makes it better than most.
Cheers!
MG
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Thank you very much.
Well he won’t be pushed just captured in a very compromising position one that helps the blackmailer.
XD
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It’s going to be a painful night for someone. If the video works that is. Liked how your story worked
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Thank you very much Mike.
Indeed a very painful night… emotionally especially.
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Love this take!
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Thanks Dale.
XD
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Great job!
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Thank you very much.
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File this under guilty pleasures! Love it!
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Awww!
Thank you very much.
🙂
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The lingo is perfect lol
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Thanks Ifeoma.
Can’t seem to open up your blog, it says it doesn’t exist.
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Welcome :). Oh thanks for letting me know, I’ll check if there’s something wrong with the link, but here it is. https://descentintoreality.wordpress.com/2016/03/30/rumour-mill/
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Nice text exchange, good take on the prompt!
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Thanks Draliman.
🙂
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That was different, for sure. Well done.
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Thanks Sandra.
🙂
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and this candidate is stepping out of the race for ‘health related issues’?
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XD
Blackmailed into retreating.
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This is a great take, I like the chat lingo, sounds realistic. He must be besotted.
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He is indeed and it will lead to his downfall.
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ha ha . Good one. I like how you made the text format work.
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Thank you very much!
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Very creative take, you captured the scene so well!
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Thank you!
XD
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Unique direction and spot-on skills with the text conversation. Great story!
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Thank you!
XD
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Hmmm, no secrets indeed. I enjoyed reading this, it felt like a movie. 😀
I imagined a cheating husband and a set-up to catch him red-handed. I imagined the wife collecting the video from “Miss Vixen” in a dark alley.
I imagined her watching the video and later showing it to him with a smirk on her face. I imagined the shock on his face and the feelings of betrayal aimed at “Miss Vixen”. I imagined the look of realisation that he’d been outsmarted at his dirty cheating game. Lol
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