Uncertain.

A sprinkle of goose bumps covered her slender arms as the taxi drove past the statue, mentally trying to shake off the eerie feeling she reflected on a similar occurrence in the past. Then, it had been her mum’s pendant that gave her the shivers as she stripped before her first client. She never wore it again except on Sundays when for some weird reason she pulled the weirdest clients ever.

Mum interpreted eerie feelings as a sign of impending evil, your conscience vibrating from clanging alarm bells. Talk about a classical old wives tale. Her first client had been a breeze, nerve wrecking, but still a breeze. Today would be no different except this time she would get paid twice for jumping the same client, who wouldn’t love that. The taxi came to a halt in front of the hotel, smiling wistfully she attempted once more to shake off the eerie feeling.


In response to the writing challenge flash fiction for aspiring writers hosted by Priceless Joy click on the link to visit the blog. The photograph was provided by Sonya – at only a 100 words, the challenge is to write a 100 – 150 words (+/- 25 words) story inspired by it. Do click on the link for other stories.

Written for Nablopomo day three.

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25 thoughts on “Uncertain.

  1. I liked your take on the picture. You give a great sense of forboding and possible foreshadowing with the necklace that the main character felt a bad feeling with before. I hope the Angel is not a bad feeling that leads to death.

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  2. Funny I thought the reason she decided to only wear the pendant on Sundays was going to be to honor her mother, my thinking Sundays were her day of “rest”…apparently not! Hmmm since she is going to be jumping the same client twice perhaps jumping is not what the client has in mind and hence her eerie feeling! Lots of twists and turns in this story and in so few words…well done!!

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