She lived a life that some would describe as being on edge: the edge at a corner to be precise.
Starring unseeingly beyond the cloud of thick nicotine fog into a dark future contorted by disillusion and charred picket fences. She was the poster girl for broken dreams.
Flicking the cigarette stub in the bin she approached the dressing table, time to get ready. First, foundation, then concealer. Slowly her transformation into an innocent sexual minx was complete, all that was left was a faded pink lipstick perfect to offset her dark bold eyes.
Putting on the dark purple jumpsuit she smiled, it was perfect: tight enough to entice, understated enough to elude memory shortly after. For her target, however, the memory would linger beyond the clothes if only for a while.
No more penny chasing: tonight the edge turns a corner, a sharp corner. What was it they said about branching out …
Written by Chioma I.N
In response to the mondaysfinishthestory flash fiction challenge hosted by Barbara. The picture and the first sentence are provided and you have to complete the story in 100- 150 words. Click on the link to read others stories. Thanks Barbara for providing the picture.
Also written for the nablopomo challenge day 2.
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What is planning next? Nice passage and it leaves you hanging. She sounds like she could be a prostitute.
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Spot on! A prostitute branching out into ‘sharper’ pursuits, not sure what they are yet.
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Whoa. Well I hope it is not too deadly, what she is going to do.
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Hehehe! Not really sure to be honest.
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Oh, she’s a prostitute. Yes, she certainly is living on the edge. Great story!
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Thanks Joy!
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Great story! My favorite section was “Starring unseeingly beyond the cloud of thick nicotine fog into a dark future contorted by disillusion and charred picket fences. She was the poster girl for broken dreams.”
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Thank you!
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Really liked your take on the prompt. Left us hanging and wanting more. 🙂
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Thanks Susan!!
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She is living on the edge. I hope she stays safe, that’s a deadly game she’s playing! Well done!
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Thanks Yolanda!
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Great story! 🙂 Is “Uncertain” a continuation of this?
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Hehhehe! … sort of.
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Great story! I loved “poster girl for broken dreams”.
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Woah… this speaks truth in some parts the world.
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Thanks Maria!
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She could be venturing into dangerous territory. She better tread carefully. Well done, CAH. —– Suzanne
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Thanks Suzanne.
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The poster girl for broken dreams is still dreaming… Don’t think it’s going to turn out to well for her?
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Hehehe! I don’t think so too.
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